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| a muse's inspiration 2005-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseI love the last line, so sad... *love* naomi x |
| LovingTarquine 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHm. I like the way you capatalized different words within the poem. And I like the message of this because I recently went through a case like this with a friend of mine. She is still facing some of the consequences. ~9/10 |
| BasilPoisoning 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis makes me very sad...thank you |
| Joey7691 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. Nice and truthful. |
| redsage 2005-01-28 ch 1, | abuseyour words.. deep. true. i dont know. you're a wonder. |
| SubliminalMsgs 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abusehahahahaha.. i love it! you'll have to excuse the laughter. im not laughing at you, im just kinda hyper.keep it up! |
| LeenaAmara 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuse^-^ Inspiring |
| London Holmes 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis is so romantic! i wish that i could right like this! -londonholmesp.s. i added you to my favroy author list |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusegreat poem, I like the born again part. I'm really glad you posted it instead of leaving as an away message. I AWAIT MORE STUFF! Blessed Be.(and update midsummers knight) |
| Morissa Jeid 2005-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great. You reveiwed my poem so i decided to check out your work. Im glad I did because i love this poem. |
| Ria Mala 2005-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like this. I'm not sure I know what you mean by Artificial love...lust maybe? But the words flow beautifully. |
| Rose of Granuaile 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI know I already told you this, but I really like this one. Good job!~Hip (Jeannette) |