 Keona Raynalise 2009-06-26 . chapter 19Wow seriously got me crying there! You are THE BEST writer EVER all your stories rock! Cant wait for you to write more! |
 Red Dynamite 2009-06-23 . chapter 9"Knowing him, I wouldn't be surprised if half of Sabbioso where chasing after him with pitchforks."
heh-heh. XP i can totally picture that. that and him table-dancing holding a bottle of wine. *takes a moment to invision* yup, brilliant. =] |
 Red Dynamite 2009-06-23 . chapter 5"Lepidottero removed several things, some hidden away. He pulled the feather off his hat to reveal the end was adourned with a sharp needle-like quill point. He yanked off his boots and pulled out several small shurikens. Lepidottero eventually had the guard's arms filled and trying to balance all his things. He topped it off with a bloody machete."
I've read this story already, and it's so amazing, I just have to go ahead and read it again. I'm, like, completely in love with Lepidottero, lmao. Too bad he's gay... ;D But anyway, this paragraph reminded my of Elizabeth in PotC#3 when she's forced to give over all her weapons before going to meet the Asian pirate lord... one of my favorite scenes, and I thought this was very funny. XD |
 Red Dynamite 2009-04-08 . chapter 19I'd have to say that this is the most amazing, well-written story I've ever read on FP. You have incredible talent (and plot lines!), and I sincerely hope you finish writing this. |
 kari-yugi 2009-01-31 . chapter 19I really enjoyed this story. You have such an awesome writing style that is seen very often. Your attention to the small details that help bring out the characters personalities and the plot are amazing. Please update again. I really want to know what happens to Tero and Papillion and would really like to see Wesp get whats coming to him. |
 JeanNicole 2009-01-23 . chapter 19I miss this story. :( I wish I knew how it ends. |
 MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-01-05 . chapter 19psh... you could have at least added a hot and heavy scene between Luc and Farfalla before you COMPLETELY ABANDONED THIS STORY FOR 3 YEARS! |
 Iskeirka 2008-11-11 . chapter 19Argh, stupid clifhangers! You gotta hate 'em but they're so fun to write! Please update again soon; this story is one of my favourites! I love your writing style; very descriptive and interesting, and the characters are great! Love it! |
 DesperateWindsDoppelganger 2008-08-02 . chapter 19x3 Another great chapter! Really can't wait to see what happens next! >> I hope Luc get's the moths and himself out of the Fiume camp all right! |
 DesperateWindsDoppelganger 2008-08-02 . chapter 16;-; Had to review this chapter simply because it was so gut-wrenching and brought tears to my eyes. Dear God, I hope Wesp get what he deserves soon...I'll hand it to you for having one of the best, vile, bad-guys in a fic. I don't think I've ever seen such an awful character that I've managed to hate so much before!
>< I hope Tero comes out okay...along with everyone else.
I shall read on now! ;-; |
 DesperateWindsDoppelganger 2008-08-02 . chapter 10>3 Loved some of your other fics so much that my curiousity finally won over and I started reading this one! Gotta stop here for today though cause it's now 2am >>;
I absolutely luv Lepidottero though, especially in this chapter! He gets along with the kids so well that it's so heartwarming ; ^ ; And poor Papillon!
This story is great and I wish I had started reading it sooner! ^o^ Can't wait to finish reading the rest tomorrow, though!
-Btw this is Yurameki_tenshi from LJ, >3- |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-06-23 . chapter 19OK, PLZ update this REALLY SOON I can't wait for an update!
and I want more Tero and Papillion(and I am french-english so i KNOW how to pronouce it!) |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-06-23 . chapter 3Ah... I see the light! |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-06-23 . chapter 2starting to make more sense... |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-06-23 . chapter 1This is good, but a little confusing at times... |