oh, lovely. the very first lines echo with a telling bit of mocking & wistfulness... the last stanza is pure gold.

-lin

rhyme slightly forced but i like the italics yes. i dig the message conveyed too. you go, girl/guy! -kismet.

pardon me, but this is a little, how should i put it, normal. writing poems about flowers is so totally in now, y'know? ahaha. ok crap aside, this one has better form and flows a lot better than some of the previous ones. but! i think for the third line of the first stanza you could use: "you're a captivating fantasy' instead- it flows better. yup, suggestion time! bring it on. whee. heh sorry flooding, but i think reviewing poetry is fun!