No, it is VERY good! The other day I tried to write something like this and I just, er, couldn't - but you have put everything I wanted to express in this poem that is so striking because of its shortness and simplicity. *Cheers* Brilliant!

It's good for a first poem. ^_^ Very short but short as good. And I didn't think it was boring. =)

aww...so simple and beautiful, if you have any time maybe you could check out some of my stuff! keep on writing! =]