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| cynthia 2005-04-10 ch 5,  | hi amanda cant bother to read the rest of ur story im finding it so boring up to chap 5 |
| sam the bear 2005-01-18 ch 1,  | yes this is very low,i am actually rewieving my own story! people this is how desprate i am to get more!! BlazingGem: yes i've changed it and added a summary how do u like it?? Read on it gets better! Cyn: sorry if the story is too 'heavy', i also used ur brother's name 4 the bad guy. hope u won't get a hissy fit cause i used his name... he, he u noe Jerome sounds like a goody-goody two shoes kinda name! *forgive me i'm just very, very, very sleepy and high for reasons i can not comprehend. maybe cause of all that coffee cake i ate... |
| blazing gem 2005-01-15 ch 1, | Whoa... that was an interesting beginning! I do wonder, how the heck did Samantha get there?! Oy, I'd suggest you try to write a description for your story s more people are willing to read it. |
| Q-pid: J-lee 2005-01-13 ch 3, | okay good story so far but right now im too tired to read the rest im onli up to chap 4 read ill the rest later its 6 am ! see there i reviewd ur storysi got up early b4 jerome got on the comp .happie ?i give u an 7 and a half out of ten so far bi |
| Q-pid:j-lee 2005-01-06 ch 2, | hey manda it cyn!ur second chapter at the end is kinda confusing n i can't remember wat was in the first chappie so yeah is pretty good though a bit too how do you say it uh ... intense i think not mi kinda story so far i give u a ... 7 and a half /10 p.s I KNEW U HAD TO MENTION IRELAND (>_ |