LOL.
So right. xD;

Randomness is good, no worries :) I liked...and can completely understand where you're coming from. ~*Never-Ending Sarcasm

Wow. I really like it. I hate it when that happens to me. You get around someone you really have a thing for and then you start acting like a retard! Well keep with the good poems!

You did the 'incredulous' tone very well. keep writing =D

Hmm, the flow was a bit clunky at the start, but it smoothed out at the end, and it came out really well. ^^ Nice work

-Marth

i love this poem.its so raw and true just exactly the way i like poems to be written! hahai added you to my msn listmy email is surf_hartnett@hotmail.comso add me bck! :)

I like it! I can totally relate to this at some point in my life. Wonderfully written!

Ps: THank you for the review ::huggles::

totally cute!! i love this!!

well written..applies to my sister. lolgreat piece.

I've felt this way before... Cute, sweet and short. Very nice

i like this poem because i know whaty it feels like. if you read you lied it's kinda similar to the one you have written but only i wrote it. (lol)um i look forward to reading a lot more of your writting. it is so intereasting i thought i was the only one who would write about this kind of stuff, i usually only write about things that happen to me also but occasonally i write about things i see happen to other peopleor things i think about alot. so yeah running out of things to say so bye.(i know there isn't alot of punctuation but once i start to think i just keep going and can't stop as you can see.)so bye.

excellent poem

Aww-- I love this poem. I totally understand what you went through since I have the biggest crush on this senior who's been my friend since my freshmen year... so that's three years (I'm a junior). He'll be going to college next year, and I'll be stuck in suburbia still, which I really despise now.

Thanks so much for your review! It really meant a lot to me. :D I'm adding you to my favorite authors list! ;)

I liked it. It's very good especially the ending but the only thing I didn't think 'felt' right was..

I must have been rightTo go crazyOver you.

^ The right doesn't roll well but otherwise, it's fantastic. =)

hey thanx for the review on my story so i thought i would do the same... nice good poem... not my style but still very good... check out my peom called we want you. it's an outlook on war just look for it if you want. ttyl.peace