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| Sunami Silverblade 2005-04-09 ch 1,   | Wow. I really liked this. My favorite line was: "I sit inside myself." Very interesting way to put it. GREAT job! The emotion portrayed here is very obvious, and sad... love/hate feelings. The rhythm... I actually like, even though it is irregular. It has a nice way of flowing when read aloud. So... nice work. ^_^ --Sunami Silverblade |
| Sinner By Nature 2005-01-05 ch 1, | hey, luv the poem, actually it's my fav for u..."A thousand and one piece puzzle","I sit inside myself As loneliness is my companion Darkness is my sanctuary Silence is the music of my choice", "My breathing My lullaby I dim to a dreamless sleep Hopefully waking up to a tomorrow When instinct takes over And I'll love you again Because I won't be able to live another today tomorrow." those are the line that make me adore ur poetry..urs is the only poetry i read bcoz im not so into poetry but i can't resist not reading urs...how could i when there's just too much beauty and sadness...oh, and i HATE sad endings but i LOVE ur poetry sad endings:P! best of luck best friend;) c ya |
| Tk.T 2005-01-02 ch 1, | Hm, interesting poem. I liked it. Creative and thought-provoking indeed. I like how you worded some of your stanzas, although the flow was a bit scattered at times... Yeah, good job on this! Happy writing! Tk.T~ |