I can't say I honestly understand this, but what I do see, I like. You seem to have political views that are less... discriminatory than many, and it's refreshing to find that.

I wish I could write a poem like that. It's written from such a real perspective. I admire that. I like how there's some rhyming here and there that doesn't interferre with the meaning of the poem. It's great. GOOD JOB

Very touching and well written. One of the best war poems i have read. Awesome job

Nikki

Thanks for the review. I am not sure I understand it though please explain it more to me. This poem was very good. I can't write poems that rime very good, but you can and good luck with that later on that is a realy nice skill.

Blaze

This is such a sad poem! But it was so good! It brings out you're feelings...

You're friend, ~Melissa~

Aka: ~La Señorita Maria~