Gorgeous! Very smooth and free! Sad. Easy to read. Terrific!

wow, this was really amazing. it had great flow. my favorite lines: The only pain she can control/Is the one that she can claim

caitlin

Good write, I really like this one.

Aw, that is so beautiful! I loved the rhyme and the way the poem flowed. Awesome!

I really like this one. Mabye my favorite..."Little angel, she cries out so silent", its beautiful and well written.

*Amber

Very beautiful and touching, MalloryI love you, girl.

wow.. very powerful and beautiful descriptions... amazing poem ::adds to favs::