i like it and trying to figure out what the 'monster' is, poetry wasnt my strongpoint in english.

Thanks a lot for the review, and wow, this is a great idea for a poem! Poor child... :(

Everyone has a monster in their closet, but some monsters wait a little longer to come out than others... deep, metaphorical stuff. Love the dark imagery and the continued use of "monster" which just carrie sthe metaphor further. Great stuff!