Wow I really like this story...though I guess I shouldn't have read it because you haven't updated in like...two years...so I probably won't get to read anymore of it...*retreats to emo corner* But I think it's an awesome idea anyways :)

I love this. I just read the prologue so far, and I really relly like it. It's new, it's fresh, it's really original and I just love Alex because he's completly insane.
Update soon, please!!

Love

XOXO
MAG

adorable! this whole story is great. and i loved the guys, they're great. and yay for Lin! embarassing situations and all!

This is an amazingly funyn and cool idea. I'd do it if it weren't for all the perverts hanging around nowadays. Write more.

Much love,

Tanika

I thought you were done making me laugh?! :D I love those boys. They were so... macho... wearing aprons and cooking truffles and all. I love the spatula bit on the apron!! Almost had me in tears.

And, mind you, I'm alone in the room right now. The people outside must be thinking I'm crazy with all the gasping laughter I'm doing.

I love the word "dude", too. I have a character who says that a lot.

=)

You simply had me laughing!! :D I love the way Axel said, "You gonna be okay?"

It cracked me up!! I can't imagine knowing a guy like that actually existed.

I'm sorry about your own personal nosebleed, though...

"And then all was reduced to chocolaty chaos." Cool. I like your style. I'm definitely looking out for more in the future!

I like the idea, it's very original. Though I don't imagine anyone in real life making such advertisement. I wonder just what kinds of situation will be awaiting for him in his new "job". As for the name, it reminds me of a rock singer... Is the character into that kind of music? It would fit him well, I think.

Great start, I hope to see more soon :)

Ohh, writes block, well is that what happened?:P Cause I was like your storys really really amazing but I just looked at the publish date and you only have three chapters out so far:P Keep up the good work though^-^

You finally got over your writers block! cheers my friend. I know, sometimes i'm so stuck in a story and I have no idea what to do with it but leave it until another idea stricks me for a chapter or two. The apron's were wicked, "My spatula is bigger than your spatula" was freakin funny as hell. Sounds like a boys apron. Hope to see them updated sooner, I enjoy. Good luck with keeping the big bad idea fairy in line, sometimes they like to run away at the wrong time. Laters.

I think that the idea is cute... I'm interested to see where you go with it. Caleb sounds SO hot!! And smart ;) Axel is kinda pompous, but i'm still into it.

i still love Caleb. And, haha, "involving kool-aid and salt" i love that. sounds just like Axel! and in my head, Axel as a kid is just so adorable. i hope you continue soon. I'm glad you like Ferdi(nand)! he was a character in one of my secret stories that the world will never see because the plot just plain sucked. Horatio is from that Shakespearean play... i'm blanking on which one that is exactly, but i've always liked that name. i considered naming my child that, or at least as a middle name, before i remembered that i don't much like children. i can't wait to see what happened and what's GOING to happen with Xavier Young! i see that my threats/bribes did the trick and you updated. HERE'S A COOKIE! (hands over whole cookie-sheet full of freshly baked cookies). that was a great interaction between the Alphabet Gang/Squad. kind of reminded me of Sesame Street, but it's all good. long as there aren't any puppets. (puppets... (shudders)). i liked this chapter a lot; seeing Caleb and meeting Axel's other friends. watching them cook. boys cooking! i can hardly imagine, lol. great work, again. continue soon?

Their cooking ritual made me giggle. Haha. Friend prostitution!!?! :D

YEA! UPDATE! I was getting a little sad over here on my side of cyber space. :( But you bounced back!! The characters are adorable...especially Axel. I like how you made them interact. That was sweet.

Hey, This story idea is awesome. I love axel. You have to keep going on this story!