That was lovely! Great characters… I find them very enjoyable to read about...and guess what, I didn't get any sleep last night because I just HAD to finish it!

I actually think Loren's death was understandable, sure I was devastated but I know what you mean. You didn't mean it to happen, that's just how the story meant to flow… I myself is trying *emphasise on the trying* to write a novel *but just never got to finish it and just left it there to rot in my documents folder* and you don't actually plan the ending or the story, you just go along with it. Make it up as you go! The ending is bittersweet but you made it happy in the end.

You kind of got me addicted to war romance :) Yay! Well done, keep up the great work!

-retronadya

This was such a beautiful story. I read your story with Jack and Sydney. Both were beautiful stories. You are absolutely right in that not all stories end happily. But Ava and Loren's story is beautiful in it's own way. I cried during the last chapter. That requires talent to be able to touch someone with words. Absolutely amazing job. And in a way, Ava finally DID get her happily every after.

This was a... truly amazing story. I read this story, expecting not to love it nearly as much as Half Past Forever, because honestly, no story will probably steal my heart away as much as Jack O'Leary and Sydney St. Claire O'Leary did. I honestly can say I only started this story because it had Jack and Sydney make appearences in it. Only until I finished reading this story did I realize I was swept up with the story just as much, no probably even more, than Half Past Forever. You're truly a gifted writer, and if or when this is published, I will be the first one in line to buy this book. You're writing as improved so much since Half Past Forever, and although Jack O'Leary and Sydney St. Claire will always be my favorite couple and always take up a peice of my heart, I guess Loren Kincaid and Ava Lamont will be taking up just as much room in my heart also. :)

Aw.
This is an amazing story!
Albeit long, but worth the read.
:)

omg you don't know how much i cried reading this. at first i didn't believe you actually killed him because i was like no that's impossible he has to live. but in the end i'm not upset about how you ended the story. just keep up the good work!

I read On a Clear Day and Half Oast Forever in less than 2 hours. They both made me cry so much, you are so talented. Now I'm off to read Designs On You. Good Job.

Bravo... bravo.

its now 3am, but this story was so amazing that i couldnt stop reading it, this story is going in my favorites list

As I said before addicting, just between you and me it is now 11:30 on a monday night and I have done neither my math or my American history homework *grins* god your stories are addicting, anyway I'm gonna go do my homework now so Happy Writing!

(sniffs) I love your WWII stories so much. They're very touching, and not to mention realistic.(excluding the time-travling part.)

Personally, I think you should go get this published as a book or something.

Wow I've finally finished THIS story.

What can I say? I think I love you for writing it. I actually chose this over the huge stack of library books on my desk, which says a lot!

I think I'm going to start bawling.

Loren and Ava and Sydney and Jack are such wonderful wonderful people. Thank you so much for creating them!

you seriously are a great writer. I read this and the other war related story.. and they are truely the best i have read. I actually almost did cry.. which is a very hard thing to in my shoes [im not the most emotional person.. >_

I have to say that was an amazing story. I truly felt I was with your characters every step of the way, and I can understand how hard it must have been for you to kill off Loren.

The emotion you were able to capture with words was incredible, and I commend you for that. Good job! I also liked how you "softened" the blow by reuniting Loren and Ava at the end. At least, they did have their happy ending.

Anyway, congratulations on a wonderful story. I look forward to reading others in the future!

Sarah

I can not explain to you how close I felt to those characters and how I really felt like I had lost someone when he died. I have been crying for every chapter since and even now everything is blurry on the screen *grabs tissue*. I am beyond touched and I swear it was all like watching a movie happen in my head. I know a part of me wanted that happy ever after ending crap, but what you did made it so real and so true for war time especially, that it made the whole thing incredibly close to me. I could feel how horrible Ava felt and what she was going through. And in the end of the story, oh my lord, I have always wanted that to happen, always always always. No author has ever written in that way so that you cry and you laugh and you smile and get angry, the whole bit, and end with a wonderful sense inside that I can't even describe. The fact that in the end they are together forever and that he has always been watching her just wrenches your heart to bits with sadness for her that she could never know, and happiness that he has always been there. It is the ultimate in bittersweet. You NEED to get this out to directors and movie makers and publishers, and if you don't I will! :) Amazing, absolutely amazing...

That was depressing... But it was nice she got back together with him in the end. I thought it was kind of appropiate that I was listening to that Evanescence song when it happened. You know the one? With the piano and the violin and all? I think it's called My Immortal. Yeah, I thought it fit real well.

Well, congrats on another story well written. Even if it was manically depressing. I look forward to reading your other ones. God, I sound like a soldier right there... Well, anyways.

Cheerio, chap.-Eveiveneg