it's king lyon isn't it...?? i bet it is.. o yeah, great chapter, wickedly awesome!

o... mallorie's a meany...

i think it was a little out of character for Annelise to spring to tears... i dunno, i just...what she said in all her lines just...i don't think it's very in character... she seems more military type, but maybe that's just me... w/e.. great job!

hmm... hey... if a night in jail was like that, you'd find me there all the time;-) ha ha... great chapter, so keep it up

i have green hair [for now at least].. does that count? wow... i'm a loser and i'm proud! great chapter! awesomely wicked!

omg! i really like this! it's wickedly awesome... i mean.. damn...why can't i follow a guy down to the sewers... lol--well here's the answer why, because there's no guys worth the follow here in my town!! my small small small little town... ok, i'll shut up now;-) keep it up!

o... they sound WAY overprotective... mrs. fletcher...ha ha, that's my last name...lol. i like it, it's awesomely wicked. keep it up!

wow an amazing and interesting story, i cant wait to read the next one(thats what i am on my way to do now)... Since i started reading this, i wasnt able to leave the computer!

I can't wait to read the second book!

Hay Mega great book! now on tothe next one...

yo this is The Gray Witch, fix the wording! please go to the faeire language. thanks

Great. Keep writing. Now, on to the next one...

-Kipcha

I loved your story! It was one of the best ones I have ever read! You really inspired me, I think you're a great writer! My favorite part was when Sara was dressed up as the undertaker, and she goes to the dungeon. I think Ryan would be the hottest right then, with his hands bound, almost hysterical, all dirty and disheveled from a night in the dungeon. I just loved it.

Exciting! I love the way you keep the story moving! It's great

Poor Sara, having to kill someone!