I really like this story so far. On to the next chapter.

You write very well!!

*Sighs* To quote a friend; "People on this site wouldn't know talent if it bit them on the **." And he is SO right. I can't believe half the crappy stories on this site have half the reviews they've got, whilst well written, well thought out, superb stories such as this one has got THREE reviews! It's bull! Well, I just want to let you know that this story is great, to keep on trucking, and never give up! =D You may not get a lot of recognition now, but someday, people are going to be paying money to read this! Just watch. ^_~ Well, ja! Keep up the good work!

i love it. keep on writing

I'm realy enjoying this chapter, at the first paragraph I could actually feel like I was there, keep on goin'!!