Hello this Fiel. :)

You know I'm not much of a lit reader, but then again I do enjoy reading once in a while and congratulations coz you intrigued me with this one!

First off, the theme is something I love - vampires! It even has the name of my favorite vampire Alucard from Castlevania SOTN. In my opinion, no other creature exemplifies more hidden agenda, subtlety and grace.

I love the way everything seems so vivid from Kael's (main character) poin of view. Your interpretation of what a male vampire feels about his nature and the environment shows a lot about your skill as a writer - being able to put oneself in the shoes of one's fictional creation and yet it seems very real. The next update should be interesting coz the author told me it would be from Diavar's (main lady) point of view!

No enough space here... Let me just say finish this asap k? :D good job!

This is a wonderful story so far. I love the characters, solid and original. And I simply adore the way you narrate the story. Very well done. I can't wait for more of this :D

~carm~

hi, this is a good beginning, there's just one thin that's a bit unrealistic, and that's the child's age. 3 is much TOO young, otherwise, it's good!

love it.. update soon pls.

great chapter and story so far. can't wait to see what happens next. and why do i get the feeling as if resal is up to something?!?! lol. please update soon! ~nicole

That was wonderful! i'm writing a vampire story, too! u should read it! *does happy dance*

what's bitin in english...?hurry up and finish it! wahahahaha!

dude, there's something wrong with your quotation marks...

YES!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED IT!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (havent read the new stuff yet, but hey! The more reviews the better!) Im supposed to suggest somethng, right? um... uh longer chapters maybe?? (im just sayin dat so that this review wont be useless and yes they're pretty short)

Jordy! "Very cute." Ahahahaha! :) I love the way it's written...Vivid ba tawag dun? ;P

very good. very cute. please continue on! It is really good and seems as if it could go somewhere. Update soon. ciao

Wow! Interesting vampire story. The tenses confused me a bit--you might want to edit a teensy part--but I like your portrayal of vampire culture. Can't wait for the next chapter!

this is really good. I love reading vampire stories even though i mostly enjoy the erotic ones. but this is a good change i guess. please update soon!