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Reviews For: White Silk Ribbon

Gun 2 the Heart
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseIt's unique. I like it. It also has a nice mysterious touch to it. Definitely love your one-shots. =)
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseCute story. :D

I wonder if you purposefully named the main character Mizu, as it means water in Japanese, to compliment Hotaru's description as being fiery. Whether or not it was purposeful, I love the symbolism.
Limited Edition
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abuseAw cute! Like always! Your flow of words is so variated and I love it! But I can notice that you've developed much by comparing this one to your more recent works!
miya_wada
2005-07-07
ch 1, anon.
abusehahaha...somehow found quite a few lines amusing. like 'what a great friend he was', '-it called for good eyesight too'...and that you wrote such a beautiful kissing scene. gah. *feels threatened* my mxm scene was so cowardly compared ahaha. but yar, its very pretty, the way you wrote without using disgusting descriptives that imply more action than beauty. tekuya's a weird name tho, but nvm me.
Esquirella
2005-03-22
ch 1,
abuseAs sensual as the other ones you've written. You take sensation to a new height.
silverg3r
2005-01-01
ch 1,
abusehey. yeehah. that was so... kinky. m. good. i'd say if i get addicted to slash its gonna be your fault. hahaha. jk. anyway. i like the part when he put the ribbon around his neck. sensuous? [how'd u spell it] gee damn now i've got funny pictures in my mind... erk. i'm beginning to think the main char must be a very pretty boy. woot. [who comes to mind? nyahah] anyway i like this "but my outstretched arms felt very much exposed to an unfamiliar cold," [not because its kinky or what] but i thought the way the kiss was carried out was very... pretty. woot. strange me. i want a photo of that. XD yarrgh i want manga to read. and ur books arh... still w me. kk. i'm going to find more slash now. damn. hahaha. happy 2005... nice songs on blog. you're good. XD
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