hm.. very true and interestingg

Interseting, odd, and new. Not one of your best, but not all of one's work can be on par. Nice rhyme and rhythem. E-J

it's official, you are a great writer.. you honestly & truly work!Keep it up! :D

quite picturesque!

From a pagan aspect that is very beautiful, almost spell like. Your words weave a vivid image. I enjoyed this piece a lot, and I will continue to read your work. By the way, you are now added to my 'Favorite Authors' list. I think you are the first to be added.

I quite like how you described it. "Treacherous as the churning figures here unseen,Mystic sketches of a dream."It's so pretty...Nicely done.

you are really good at writign long poems, i could never stay on topic long enough to write one longer than 7 lines lol. Good work M'lady you never told me you were such a good writer.

William

I loved your rhyming! It flowed nicely and you used nice words - very nice. Smoke - bleh.