 Simian 2005-04-09 . chapter 1I know how that feels. |
 Thyrt 2005-04-03 . chapter 1wow..this hit a soft spot for me..i feel this way..and sometimes i don't even realize it..but the feeling is always there...great job! |
 Vince 2005-03-27 . chapter 1 sounds...subliminal...i think ^^;; |
 artemisathene 2005-03-18 . chapter 1 Hey, thanks for the review. :)
I like this... especially "I trick myself/ into being hung by a silver chain"... very unique imagery. |
 simpleplan13 2005-01-23 . chapter 1wow... a little complicated, but very well done... I liek it |
 poetic abortion 2005-01-18 . chapter 1This is really tpuching and just a powerful poem. Well done !!
~* Noelle *~ |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-12-31 . chapter 1If fate had both spun,
Entwined—plunged, then current swum,
¿Would life have begun? —m— |