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Reviews For: Me, You, and Who
Simian 2005-04-09 . chapter 1
I know how that feels.
Thyrt 2005-04-03 . chapter 1
wow..this hit a soft spot for me..i feel this way..and sometimes i don't even realize it..but the feeling is always there...great job!
Vince 2005-03-27 . chapter 1
sounds...subliminal...i think ^^;;
artemisathene 2005-03-18 . chapter 1
Hey, thanks for the review. :)

I like this... especially "I trick myself/ into being hung by a silver chain"... very unique imagery.
simpleplan13 2005-01-23 . chapter 1
wow... a little complicated, but very well done... I liek it
poetic abortion 2005-01-18 . chapter 1
This is really tpuching and just a powerful poem. Well done !!

~* Noelle *~
Manuel Fajar 2004-12-31 . chapter 1
If fate had both spun,

Entwined—plunged, then current swum,

¿Would life have begun? —m—
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