Once again, you add in some completely pointless lines so that the poem will rhyme. "answer the loom" ? "answer the wick"? If you want it to rhyme so bad, think of something good, or at least, something that makes sense. Don't get me wrong, keep writing, just keep in mind, fictionpress is for finished, polished work. We don't want to see every page of your notebook.

i like the way the words "let the magic come" are repeated throughout the poem. very inspirational poem. ^^

^_^ Nice work. Keep writing!

~Red