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| Oki3xDoki3 2006-11-06 ch 6,   | kya~~ I missed you! I want more! I love them two so much! I want some action (if ya know what I mean) I gotta eye on ya! |
| Oki3xDoki3 2006-03-05 ch 5, | kya! Unmei is kyote! Make it longer!! I have to pry my eyes out everytime it so short! jez! keep going keep going! |
| Sh'arra Rie 2005-04-03 ch 5, | This is deffenetly interesting and origanal, I like it. I am a little confued about how Azarel became a fallen angel... You didn't decribe it varry well in the chapter. Update soon. |
| Maris. S 2005-01-08 ch 2, | WAI~!! ::dies:: another chappie hanger... x.x Oi oi! Suki desu!! This is so sweet!! I wanna know what happens next! Unmei sounds so adorable ^^ |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-02 ch 4, | Wow very interesting plot twist. I loved the way that you had the dream show what happened. Great details and again your building on your characters. Good write. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-02 ch 3, | Great chapter. I loved the power of the pendent and how the jerks got what they deserved. Another great addition and no it didnt seem to rushed. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-01-02 ch 2, | Nice chapter. I love the character development that you have going on with Unmei. Very nice so far...keep up the good writing. |
| Dire deWolf 2005-01-01 ch 4, | Oh! That's how they are related! |
| Dire deWolf 2005-01-01 ch 3, | Unmei seems very cute. *Wondering how the word 'prince' and the guardian angel tie together* |
| Dire deWolf 2005-01-01 ch 2, | *GRIN* Me likes! Mean managers, but that's okay; some people are like that. |
| Dire deWolf 2005-01-01 ch 1, | WHOA! *stutters word that are not able to come* WHOA! YOU CAN MAKE SOME CHARACTERS NOW! I DON'T THINK I COULD MAKE ANTAGONISTS LIKE THAT! YOU REALLY CAUGHT THEM! |
| Maris. S 2004-12-31 ch 1, | WAI~~! Such a good cliff hanger!! >.< Write more soon when ya get the chance!! Happy New Years! ^.~V |
| tmelange1 2004-12-31 ch 1, | Interesting beginning. Kudos. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-31 ch 1, | O very interesting so far. I loved how you made the setting so dark for a prince to be. Nice character descriptions so far...I am hooked by this chapter which says alot ((I have a short attention span *smile*))! Great piece though...so keep up the good writing. |
| The Crimson Angel Of Time 2004-12-31 ch 1, | Well, I think it was really thoughtful that Azarel left some pain numbing cream for the kid, but maybe he could've left some CASH instead?! LOL! Just Kidding! Great story, so you better update. If you don't, I'm gonna come looking for you! |