again a "drawing" title; this one completely goes: from head to toes. hee hee I like it. "When I Close My Eyes" is a recurring melody in my mind similar to this sentiment. sweet! xo

aw, this is a sweet little poem. i really liked it. i expecially liked how you compared love to an endless road, very original. love the title too. thanks for reveiwing my poem! talk to you later!

-k

Wow! Your gift with words is certainly flowing at the moment.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

There's a really fun rythem to this poem. I like how it's split into these short beats. I like the last stanza, about traveling the dream. It made sence to me. I think I got too caught up in the fun of reading such a rythemed poem, that I didn't pick up the whole meaning :P

A soft, gentle feeling to this poem. I liked it very much and I look forward to more of your work. Keep it up.

CT

Awesome poem. :D I relate.

Magnifico! Great poem, really like the progression from a fleeting hope to an eternal heartache. Really liked the last time,it makes it seem like your having in your mind where its safe and nothing can go is like it is more perfect to have it here than it would ever be in real life but you'd rather believe in reality than self created paradise.

This one is seriously good, a bit lonely too,I think, but that's one of the good points here. I just liked it, hah.. -

Oh! That's really cool! Wicked great job.

Oo. I liked this. It has a soft longing feel to it. Not... desperate... simply waiting patiently, I suppose. :)

It was nice.

Jen

Thanks for the review!

This is great, keep up the good work :)

That was really sad - but also very good. I cant say much but I felt the pain.

yay, you posted. i like the rhythm in this one... lots of emotion put in. keep writing 0)