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| Erudites 2008-11-21 ch 48,  | Please keep it up--I want to know what happens!! |
| hypershadow5g 2008-11-10 ch 48,  | i hate you. plot twists. no. bad. overall good chapter, something unexpected, and kept my interest despite the several typing errors that wanted to make me stab my eyes out with forks. thanks, keep it up |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-25 ch 47, | well...you didnt tell me to reveiw at the end of the chapter..so...im not going to! >D anyway, is the end in sight (finally), or are you going to keep dragging me along by the ear like you have been for the past...3-4 years? |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-25 ch 46, | "there are other things that need to be done" |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-25 ch 45, | I feel like the odd duck here, because now in your story there's action, there's "action" (;D), and there have been a few short chapters, things your story was great without... x.x stop listening to me! err...other then this...nvrmnd, we must talk about this more (ironic, i know) |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-17 ch 43, | Ronan seems a bit too arrogant...hopefully that will play into his demise, cause if it doesnt, i will be seriously blue balled x.x |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-11 ch 42, | why doesnt she just kill him? x.x she doesnt want the throne anyway, and i highly doubt anyone would blame her for it! |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-11 ch 41, | out of all the greatness of this story, there is one thing that continues to annoy me. why does it seem like calesta picks and chooses when and where to stand up to herself against a greater threat? id hate to think that im insane for thinking that she seems to better under pressure, but will collapse under pressure as well, cause that makes me feel a tad schizophrenic. maybe im just looking into it a bit much? |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-06 ch 40, | maybe i just took too long of breaks from reading this (ok, maybe not maybe), but i cant seem to remember who jozlen is...but good, solid chapter, but started getting confusing once you stopped listing who was speaking even though the character was thinking between other characters speaking. |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-05 ch 39, | seriously, short chapters? x.x i havent glanced at the next chapter, but for your sake it better be long. and to summarize that I thought was going through Calesta's mind, ill say "bow chika wow wow." however, thats just me, and both of us know what kind of mind i have. and to get rid or the seriousness of my previous two statements, boingo boing whoopsy knickers. that is all |
| hypershadow5g 2008-09-05 ch 38, | as much as i bicker and complain, NEVER make a short chapter again. i hardly have anything to review here. sorry |
| hypershadow5g 2008-08-26 ch 37, | if i had never seen pirates of the caribbean, i wouldve never known what acquiescence was...so i fail to acquiesce to your request on reading the rest of this chapter...lol theres a 4 in the middle of "continued" in one of the later paragraphs...and i thought the king went with them on the ship... |
| hypershadow5g 2008-08-12 ch 36, | were we supposed to remember the trip into the dungeons, or was that just a personal antaine thing? i sure hope its not the first one |
| hypershadow5g 2008-08-12 ch 35, | FINA-FREAKING-LLY! action! which is what ive been begging for, since...i dunno...the second chapter of the first version of this story?? this chapter is great, if nothing else, for that reason ^^ |
| Erudites 2008-07-09 ch 44, | I'm so glad that you have been continuing on with this. Anyway, I have to say that I was surprised. Looking back on this chapter, I really should have seen that coming, at least a little, but I was surprised--a good surprised. |