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| The Asian Banana 2007-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseHave you ever seen the movie "The Sweet Hereafter"? It's a Canadian film and I'm telling you, it's pretty good. You know, I really enjoyed writing my parody and I can tell that you had no idea just how much by the review you left me. Anyway, this poem is quite the interesting combination of words here. Yeah. You've got the 'crescendo' there and you know what? 'Retardando'? Funniest word ever. Thanks. |
| Cammy Nightfall 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis peom was something simple yet full of heart and well put to the point. I enjoyed it rather greatly, and being a person of music myself. (not in choir, though) I'm glad to say I'm proud someone knows who to use the terms of music correctly. It almost makes me want to go see a choir singing, possibly a gathering of several choirs to sample this and thats.. Who knows, but I enjoyed your poem. Cammy Nightfall - "One step, one fall, one freedom." |
| Widom 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWell, this was entertaining. Well written, and it was about an interesting subject. Of course, if I knew a damn thing about music than I may have liked it more. If that's possible. |
| Nova-Janna 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked that a lot. There was an interesting rythm, and it flowed really well. The whole idea is great to begin with, of course, and occasionally it seemed to rhyme, even if it was only one of those almost-rhymes. Good job. |
| Esquirella 2005-01-21 ch 1, | abuseAh, an awesome observation about how people should treat each other. We're all the same, even though there are differences. Loved this, too. Keep writing. |
| Hannah 2005-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's diffrent. |
| Insane Angel 2005-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThats a pretty poem. I like how you use music definitions in it. |