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| theCoffeeEnzyme 2005-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseonce again, you have left me speechless. this is most certainly the best you've ever written, there's so many different things that you touch on its mind boggling. p.s. yes, i review a lot but this is due to the fact that i have no life. i am sorry if im annoying the hell out of you. |
| erasedcrap 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abuseMasterfully written. Could use a few editing ideas here and there, but the writing, message and rhythm are all superior.You've got a natural ability with words in your poetry. It comes out so smooth and easy with so much meaning. This is awesome. |
| Brenden James 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseYeah it was good but can you please not say HANG YOURSELF on my story because that really was not cool of you and i cant send you an email but good poem NOT |
| Cthulhu 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThere were many more colloquialisms in this piece than you normally use and made for a refreshing change, I liked it! |
| lola-in-slacks 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseIt had sex, it had necrophilia, it had a blonde giving head, it had a 7 inch **. It had drugs, it had wine, it had futility. It was one big New Year's Eve party. It was kool. |
| John Stein PhD 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, logical...you've done it. The one piece you wrote when you weren't drunk. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is as an epic should be. Really its perfect and you should get published because you're just brilliant. Keep writing :D |
| TiEka Koniku 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuse::is speechless:: although it does jump around quite a bit, and is a little hard to understand, i think i got enough of it to get some points. a lot of what you say in this, i can relate to.. or at least know where you coming from. other than the addictions.. i really think you got something goin. (if that made any sense at all). *TI* |