Reviews for Raiding Daybreak - FictionPress.com

wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-06 ch 1,	That was so artsy. honestly. I fell in love with it. every little minor detail of it.
Illegal Copyright Streaker 2005-01-27 ch 1,	The thing that most catches my attention in this poem is the imagery (as a former reviewer said). "...subject to the rape and pillage of flies" has to be my favorite line.
tyrantvirus 2005-01-24 ch 1,	That is some debt you owe the moon. Have you ever been published? If not I don't see why you shouldn't be. Great work.
Boadicia 2005-01-06 ch 1,	This is a beautiful poem. I had to read through it a few times before I understand it completely, because I think it has a much deeper meaning than what comes immediately to mind. I especially like the idea of "repaying my debt to the moon." Excellent work.
Infinity Plus One 2005-01-05 ch 1,	Wow - details! This poem is quite exquisite. "Like my smudged black-whorls" - The imagery is beautiful.