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| Toadster 2005-07-01 ch 1,   | very paradoxical, and it makes me think. i like the allusion. |
| amy hobbes 2005-04-22 ch 1, | a little confusing if u try to analyse it, but a terrific poem. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-02-06 ch 1, | short but thought provoking. I loved the title. |
| tyrantvirus 2005-01-21 ch 1, | Very nice, I like how everything (including the title) flowed so well and approached the overall moral of this world. Greed and money have turned us away from the dark ages, but now that we're arrived what use is there for wars? We've no land to acquire so we invest in nothing, a name, something we will never touch recognize or even know for that matter. Once tales were passed through the ages, for thousands of years as entertainment and tribute; no longer however. We've adopted our brand new stars eraising those which lived in the sky. People are forgotten now, ever so more than before. That is what I got from 'The Lotus Eaters' as I understood it. Granted it may not have been what you intended. Excellent work, the construction was effective and the descriptions were superb. Thank you for reading my work and giving me such a thorough review, the best I've had in a long time. -ViR_US |
| Spootasia Tomoe 2005-01-17 ch 1, | i love how you call it the lotus eaters. it fits in so well with what happened between odysseus and the men of the same title. beautiful poem. everything ties in so well. it's very interesting. congrats! and thank you for reviewing my own poem, as well ^^ |
| linaeve 2005-01-17 ch 1, | a nice reminder to jolt back into reality. cheers,lin. |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-01-05 ch 1, | "A waste of memory" - interesting analogy here.I could compare this poem to life today, especially in cities. |