What drives this poem is the rhythm and rhyming scheme. Beautifully done, that your short lines are descriptive ones (uniformity! in a poem! amazing!). And the rhyming just keeps happening, stringing the separate concepts together and uniting the piece. The waves of simplicity, punctuated by elaboration...yay! I just don't know how the first three (four? is "Roam" the title, or a line?) lines fit with the rest of the poem.

Beautiful. Absoultly beautiful...but then again, your work, is always beautiful. I updated my pathatic U.C.A. I am thinking of taking it down, so if you would like the rest of that story, please e-mail about it. Because as a wannabe be real life writer, I don't think I'm grasping my readers. A lot of my writing has to do with time and skill. And my skill sucks. So if you want more of U.C.A., you're going to have to ask me so I can send them to you, b/c I am ashamed to even post it. That is why I will take it down shortly. But anyway, love your work, rock on!

Raging Lion

That's DEFINITELY not stupid! ^_^ I liked it a lot! The imagery was great and the emotion was wonderful! Great job! ^_~