You ** canadan, YOU stole half that poem. You don't even know what's about do you?

Aww.. well I am no Canadian, but I thnik it's real sweet of you to thank them. I am also attached to my country. ^^ Love the flow

The local feeling of this poem--'In Flander's field'--makes it feel very close to me, as if it's two towns over from me. The repetition definitely strengthens this line. I also like the lines (if I may quote,) 'Among those unbreakable / Hearts, spirits and souls.' This combines the rhythm of poetry with emotion--something that I never quite mastered. Nice work!

A tragic ending but so very powerful. Keep up the great writing!

Short and powerful. very sad. good job.