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| MACV-SOG 2005-01-28 ch 1,   | You ** canadan, YOU stole half that poem. You don't even know what's about do you? |
| Crazy Biene 2005-01-25 ch 1, | Aww.. well I am no Canadian, but I thnik it's real sweet of you to thank them. I am also attached to my country. ^^ Love the flow |
| MiggsThompson 2005-01-10 ch 1, | The local feeling of this poem--'In Flander's field'--makes it feel very close to me, as if it's two towns over from me. The repetition definitely strengthens this line. I also like the lines (if I may quote,) 'Among those unbreakable / Hearts, spirits and souls.' This combines the rhythm of poetry with emotion--something that I never quite mastered. Nice work! |
| M. R. Smale 2005-01-02 ch 1, | A tragic ending but so very powerful. Keep up the great writing! |
| Aslan Israel 2005-01-02 ch 1, | Short and powerful. very sad. good job. |