Very nice, emotions well portrayed. Keep up the great work and thanks for your reviews as well! :)

Great job, I LOVED IT!

Wow - this poem is so emotional. Very nice job. One small thing - in the line "To weak to get out of bed", "To" should be "Too." Keep writing!

I really like it a lot.. its very well written and I know the feeling... nice rhyming and I didnt really expect the ending, but I liked it

Good use of repetition and structure. You do have a few mistakes though - their instead of there, vein instead of vain - I have no idea if there're intentional or not - but if not fix em up. Overall a good poem.

-write on!

Very powerful Feral. One of your best yet.

~ Noelle ~