the lines are short but get the message out. i like that.

This poem was sad, but you know, sometimes I really don't think people stop to consider the others they hurt with their shallow aims and their own trife to be the best or most popular. Its great to see a poem dealing with the reality of whats happening now. This one gets in the readers face and lets them see the victims perspective of some of the crueler side of humanity. Well done, you truly wrote a thought provocer here.