I'm trying to find my favs of ur poems- i havent read 2 many but i like this one...

Very descriptive. The situation really gets through to the reader. flows well too. good work on this!

this is really nice!

stanzas? u can help me? ok, sure! just email me :)thank you!

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you are truley a writer who writes from there emotions, emotions are sometimes tthe key to writing. my writing teacher once told me that I write from the heart and that emotions can be the key to your writing poems. I'm glad I took her advice and you should take mines

absolutely beautiful and the ending was perfect! *high fives*

just WOW! this says so much on so many levels

Nice poems! :)

thats great! all 3 of them!

i like the longest verson best! lol they r all good tho!

aww. this is just as sweet as the 3rd, but im a romantic person so i like the 3rd best :) this one is good 2!

aw! this is so sweet! i like this a lot! keep it up!

All three of them are amazing but I think I like the second the most. I found the first didnt say enough, the third told a little too much with the last stanza but the secnd was just right. Having said that,I thought all three together worked really really well read in sequence. Good write!

this was also very nice n sweet I liked them all

this was nice very good I like this one better then the first one you are an amazing writer

wow that was nice very sweet good job