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Reviews For: Fading Dreams
tripletxtreme 2005-01-03 . chapter 1
Oh this is a sad one. I almost cried. Very down- to -earth, extremely realistic. I enjoyed this immensely. I like this.
Aqua Illuminati 2005-01-01 . chapter 1
Well, I don't mean to be rude, but the plot is a little cliched. On the other hand, I rather like the twist at the end. It's a very good idea, although if you don't mind my saying so, I doubt anyone would be so generous as to dig out one hundred thousand from his own pocket to give to an employee, regardless of faithfulness. And I would advise you to check for mistakes, I've spotted quite a few missing words. Still, it's quite well done.
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