|Reviews for Breathe Without Air|
| Grayhome 3/11/07 . chapter 1
I understand what you're trying to say, but I think you could strengthen it a bit. You've communicated an idea, but without sufficient emotion. And it IS a good idea, by the way.
| fadedrainbows 12/4/05 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so cute! It's very short, and normally I don't like very short poems, but this is cute! Well done.
| addie pray 2/26/05 . chapter 1
| Crazy Biene 1/23/05 . chapter 1
I think you have a really, really, really creative mind. I never thought of these things... all i thought of was "Omg I better not get overweight, will I have a bf sometimes soon? Am I going to fail in school?" U know what I mean? Typical teenage questions... Welcome to my world! -rolls eyes and snickers- anyway I realy like this... I love th ending," Just maybe, I could live Without you" that rocked butt! That also shows character... you are a strong-willed grl...right? Am I right or am I right? Im too talkative. Let me shut up! Anyway to make this short..good job.
| Seeker of the Way 1/22/05 . chapter 1
woah! genius at work!
go see "House of the Flying Daggers" ! It's BRILLIANT!
| CrazyChik 1/15/05 . chapter 1
Aw...I loved it!
| myno 1/12/05 . chapter 1
beautiful. The rythm is superb, and I love the comparison of one you love to air- i often feel that way about a certain guy. I think you might enjoy my poem "Mouth to Mouth," but I don't care whether or not you read it, i get enough reviews without begging. Just that it has the same idea behind it as this poem.
| Rocky G 1/12/05 . chapter 1
Very awesome poem, I like the line see without eyes the most. The ending is perfect, its all perfect. I enjoyed reading your work I will have to add this to my favorites list.
| Ivy Thorn 1/12/05 . chapter 1
You have a deliciously straightforward way with words that can still imply deeper undertones. I love the outward simplicity of this poem and all that it represents. Lovely.
| Scarlet Starfire 1/12/05 . chapter 1
Wow, that is very beautiful, and I can relate to it completely. It's very lovely
| CarpeDiem28 1/7/05 . chapter 1
Excellent Poem. I can relate.
| Nasifah 1/4/05 . chapter 1
Oh! That's so poignant! Lovely poem - you didn't waste any words.
| darkpaladin13 1/3/05 . chapter 1
I liked it. You did a great job of formatting and structure. It adds a lot to the poem and it's effect. Great work.
| Celestial-Sorrow 1/2/05 . chapter 1
Works such as this was why I love your work. This short and simple piece really gets the message across! I'm wow'd !
| WarriorHeart 1/2/05 . chapter 1
incredible, as always.