WOW that was really good. I really liked it great job. It was suspenceful...somewhat...no wait yes it was. Anyways great job. Oh the one thing i would changed is in your summery, you don't have to say that new chapters will be posted weekly, that justs takes up space in the summery when you could just make a longer summery.

B~bye, i will have you on my alery list

Wolf*Frost