 Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 . chapter 1This poem sounds a bit like me. The OCD in me just shoots out and screams this is what drives one insane. Your poem is wonderful though. The questions add to the tiring process...the eternal wanting things to be in perfect peace and place. Great write. |
 negligible fictional force 2005-01-05 . chapter 1m. nicely abstract. i like the overall feel yeah. you're improving! big whoo. -kismet. |
 linaeve 2005-01-04 . chapter 1guilty as accused.
i'm trying to tone it down, really-- i'm much less obsessive compulsive than before!
"Cerebral pulsing of keys"-- beautiful.
though i prefer Arial 11 pt or Verdana 10.5pt =P
cheers,lin. |
 Manuel Fajar 2005-01-02 . chapter 1Compulsion cares not,
For cold, heat or time—Impulse,
Drives obsession's heart. —m— |
 Nameless Melancholy 2005-01-02 . chapter 1I like this one. =) short and well written...especially the last line. (btw..i was reading ur profile..is 'tesseract' from a wrinkle in time??) |