ok...so was it a demon or DID?

Wow - the title and summary of this drew me in... its awesome!

I love the way you wrote this, almost a lil like Gollum(sp?) from LOTR.. reminded me of that, yeh.

You haven't seen "One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest" by any chance? Coz this piece reminded me a lil of that also..

Anyway, enough of me saying what this reminded me of, lol. I think this was really well written - i like how each paragraph had its own views... but was... kinda... linked... to the others, if that makes sense?

Hmm...

inna nutshell, i luff this! Awesome!

wolfeh (11.35 in the am)

cool story, i really liked it

It's definitely a interesting concept for a story. It would be ironic that the thing that is supposed to be making you better, is actually making you worse. o_o Omg! lol. Scariness!

Forever more,

loserz. ;)

That was heaps cool, I loved it.

Cool! This is freaky! Really tense as well and a great idea for a story. Keep it up!

Reminds me almost of Yuki..but you know, without the "In the name of God" part.

I know you love Gravitation.