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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseAww i like this! it's really sweet but the structure somehow makes this more 'grown up', i love all the lines after "Of angelic white" most x weasel within x |
| Katt Thrasher 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThis so so sweet and romantic ^_^ I can almost see the big, fat, white flakes fluttering down to the ground around a pair of friends and/or lovers...sigh... |
| Shelia Gavin 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseaw, it's so pretty! It just renders such a beautiful image in my head! I love it! REally nice job, Ash-chan! |
| marshbar960 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abusevery vivid and idealistic. loved the imageries and the wording you used to help portray your feelings and develop your overall mood. thanks for sharing and keep writing! |
| aeolyn 2005-01-02 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I liked the end of this poem. |