Short, sweet, and good for venting ^_^ The metery-thing was good, and you seem to be very good at stringing together very descriptive words and achieving the maximum effect ; )

-pats you on the back- It's okay that you have a -coughcough- _couple_ -wink- demonic-like poems...it's healthy. Plus, they make for an interesting read. It's another great poem, so be happy! :D