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Midnights Scream 2008-07-19 ch 16,	abuseah.It's so cute. I was a little worried about about things ending badly at first, but I'm glad everything worked out. :) this is a very good story.
Jinx 2008-03-30 ch 16, anon.	abuseThis was a really good story, the only thing is I wonder what happened to Torii and Moria's parents. Overall though I really liked this. I did notice a few grammer errors, but oh-well. If you ever need a beta, I'm available. Just so you know. Anyway...good job and good luck with any future projects.
True.Randomness 2008-01-20 ch 16,	abuseOMG. I loved this story, it was fantastic. I was so on the edge and wondering what would happen in the end. Would Moria die, or maybe Bradley? I was so hoping it would end happyly for those two and am very glad it did.
Jabberwocky 101 2007-08-05 ch 16,	abuseI'm sure you've heard all kinds of things about how great your stories are and things like that; so I'll refrain. I have to say that I was rather hesitant to read This War of Ours, but I'm glad I did. Once I started reading it I couldn't seem to stop. You're amazing.
SaraMaxine 2007-06-19 ch 11,	abusejust wanted to thank you for not going into too much detail despite numerous oportunities.
chekiita 2007-04-12 ch 16,	abuseonce again I've read a wonderfull story I've been reading all your stories in order and I can't say i have a favorite I love them all. one thing though I couldn't read chapter 12 of this war of ours, it wouldn't open. another that Ive seen an improvement on since the first one I read is the spelling of some words, I hope you don't take this badly but you sometimes use some words that mean soemthing else, I'm guessing you have automatic spellcheck and it changes the words. anyway, love your work!! I still have a bunch of your stories to read, I've loved the first five, only 10 to go.
Angel of Hell 13 2007-04-02 ch 1,	abuseThis was just... amazing. I have no words. It's the first ever story I read that included mpreg, and I thank you for not putting that in the summary, because I would have skipped it and missed out on this incredible story.
Zelda Hime 2007-02-10 ch 16,	abuseYour story is very good! I loved Moria and Réalta! I don't know why, but those two just stole my heart. I wish you would write more things with those two. Moria should get a little brother giggles
Fiona Hinseko and Sora Ason... 2007-02-04 ch 5,	abuseOMG!! I started reading this and the story is incredible! I love Moria's character! He's so freakin' awesome! And Brad is so cool! I hope something good happens to Montana, Piza and Brad... the other's can die. I don't like Johanson or the new guys! I love your story!
Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-27 ch 16,	abusei love this story not to menchin this is the first story i've ever read where one of the charcters have my name if fact i've never met anyone with the same name as me. oh and you spelled it the same way as i do too! lol sorry i thought that was funny. anyways i love this story and i think i've read almost all of you stories now!
kanjil 2006-10-10 ch 16, anon.	abuseGreat story, so dark and gripping but also with a happy end. Everything is so well described and you make the mpreg really plausible.
chrnoskitty 2006-09-06 ch 16,	abuseI just got done reading this story, After reading Tainted Angel (Backwards, I know) and now I feel that I understand why in one of the chapters something about Moria being mean and Bradley needing to hit him... it all makes sense now, 'cause in Tainted Angel Moria seemed sweet, submissive, so I couldn't see how Moria would need to be put in his place... I really, really enjoyed this story. It was fun to read, and now I also know why Moria and Bradley are hesitant to tell Blair how they met (Imagine explaining that: "I forced him into relations with me... and yeah. That's about it.") You're a really, really great writer!! And hope to see some new chapters (obviously not on this!!) soon! ^^
Kageyama Tatsuya 2006-08-28 ch 16,	abuseYou are truly amazing! I was up very late one night talking to Jay. During that conversation, he sent me a link to this story saying, "One of my friends...shes great." Since Jay and I usually enjoy the same things, I jumped into this story! I have entered its depths and emerged once again here in reality. I have come to one single conclusion, you are a fantastic writer! I truly enjoyed this work and look forward to reading all the others. Though I don't know many people on this site yet, I would highly enjoy it if you would take a look at my division. ^_^ You have such great talent! Brava! Absolutely incredible! I'm kinda sad that it had to end, but I suppose the beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Anyway, congratulations on a job well done. Hope to converse with you soon. (LOL) Ciao!
ME 2006-08-03 ch 7, anon.	abusewhy does Torii belong to Cyric Masamune? id really like to know what will happen to Torii, but there isnt anything to read on the matter...
Lady Psychic 2006-05-01 ch 16,	abuseWow! This was an awesome story. I know this because I read the entire thing in one session. I usually don't do this for long stories, but I just couldn't stop reading.

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