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Im Just Mlssundaztood 2009-07-29 . chapter 4
I love the song.

Honestly, they aren't many people that are totally confident with themselves. Pretend you are okay, don't let them walk all over you.

Love the story so far.

-Im Just Mlssundaztood
akaCHEEKS 2009-07-20 . chapter 7
alright. you know what? i am hella sorry. but god this is just boring me to death. its like one of those action movies that just drags on. but there's really no action to keep the viewers engaged. **. i am hella sorry. it must be a really good story in all to get all those reviews.. but i feel like maybe you should cut down on your chapters. they are so incredibly long that i start to feel sleepy reading it. you describe every little detail that goes on! its ok to skip some and get straight to the point sweetie. but for writing this at age 13 though, props to you man!
chaos.into.shadow 2009-06-08 . chapter 2
Hey,
looks good, just wondering, is this an incest story?
~chaos.into.shadow
akaCHEEKS 2009-05-25 . chapter 3
man for all the writing that you've done. i think you deserve more than 200something+ reviews!
akaCHEEKS 2009-05-25 . chapter 1
ooh caught my attention with your preview! woah. sounds interested already. definately a hook, line, and sinker material!
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 1
Another thing - the summary for this one is pretty dodgy...grammatical errors...and just general lack of sense. I probably wouldn't have read it, looking at the summary, but it was from you, so...
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 24
The ending was way too ambiguous =(

It didn't really feel like an ending.

But hey, I love it a lot more than I would have if it ended with 'and they all lived happily ever after'. Those endings are always boring.

And Catharsis IS better!! Despite the whole...boarding school setting...I love it anyway.

By the way, are you ever planning to finish Predator? Cause that's definitely my favourite fic of yours. And it's been so long...and you're almost done!! Dying of curiosity here!! Oh, and are you ever gonna say who Predator, Producer and Consumer are? Dying of curiosity about that too.

- Saranya.
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 22
..."Take her back to the cell" is SIX words. lol.
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 20
...I'm a little confused about why they would want to kill Jack, of all the sector heads...Why would they kill the Cadlian one??
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 17
No...I liked Lacey, she was...comic relief, kinda, with her weird egg/food thing.

Ah well, I'm sure you have your reasons, you always do.
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-15 . chapter 13
LOL. Denim trousers? I'm pretty sure they're the same thing as jeans. =P
The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-14 . chapter 10
Hey, you keep saying chord instead of cord. If you're talking about the rope thing, it's cord. A chord is either the musical thing or the circe geometry thing =P.

I love you, by the way, you're a genius. Might have said that to you before, but yeah. I don't like this one quite as much as your other ones though...

- Saranya.
lily.x 2008-09-20 . chapter 24
sequel please. :}
Jarvis 51 2008-08-18 . chapter 24
good book. end needs work/sequal.
kurara3 2006-12-18 . chapter 24
omg that was so sad. i was hoping it would get alittle better at the end but ya. not that it wasn't a good story just a bit on the sad side though.
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