O this one is really great, i feel the same way alot of times! I smile I laugh and act as if I'm having a good time but inside somethings crushing...very very good.

well, the theme isn't unique, but it's quite a good poem.

This was great! And I can totally relate to this poem. Once you've really been wounded, it's hard to open yourself up to other people again. So, you keep them at arms distance and don't let them see who you really are. But, yeah, I'll stop rambling now. ;)

~Daphne~

i can really relate to wut u're saying. do u really feel like this though cuz if so, u know u can talk to me anytime :). lol. we're in english class right now by the way. anyways, really good. great emotions!

~BeautifulEcho~

oh, some of them can see... but none of them want to believe. look at my haunted eyes- that was my sorry excuse for trying to say: "LOOK THROUGH MY MASK and see the real me."

This poem hits home.