Good story so far and I choose Heath all the way, Corbin is intruding on the guy's story

I loooved your story!

This has to be one of the cutest stories I've ever read. I did think that you rushed the ending a bit.

xoxo,
JustWish

OMG I'm so sorry I will really sound like a bitch into telling this but..
I really really dislike Mac's character :(

But the story is really great! I love it! I just couldn't bring myself to like Mac. I don't know, there is something in her personality that's bothering me but I can't point it out and I don't know why am I even reviewing in this chapter instead to the last one but I really really love this story! You are such a great writer!

I love Corbin and Heath :))

Loved it! Such a cute and awesome story :D :D

What the flip? I don't understand what happened in the last four chapters at all!

dude i love your own conversations with your characters it fan-freakin'-tastic ya know? which by the way laughing ou loud makes me look like a freak reading this in a public place *(sigh- thanks for the confidence boost - another sigh)* any way i love your story its amazing and i hope you become published to mack mucho money (wewe huh?Huh?) -with a french accent

LOVE THIS STORY BUCKETS :$

i remember reading awhile back and i forgot to review :P

excuseee meee. this story was amazinggg x

The corbin being gay really disappointed me );

rly nice story. loved it a lot.

I like this story and the characters. They sound to be a handful.

When you wrote the story you asked the readers which character (male character) we like more: Heath or Corbin. Even though it was ages ago I thought I let you know my opinion - years later.

I prefer Heath. He's more of a character. Corbin is this typical brother/"sexless" friend.

Joey 3 Lmfao i love the pants part :D

wow your story is hilarious 3 :D

I still don't know who to root for. Corbin and Heath are both sweet, nice, handsome, and funny. Everything to want with a guy. For this chapter I have to say Corbin because he invited Mac along when Heath bailed on her. Heath also lost points by going out with that almost slut, Sapphire.

Okay, at first I hated how Heath treated her, and then went on and dissed Mac. She's cool and doesn't come from a super rich family like majority of stories. So, right now Corbin's winning because so far he's picture perfect of a nice guy.

I thought I was going to hate Sapphire because she appeared to be a total bimbo at first. Then, she got super nice when she apologized and stuff. Last, she went back to being part bimbo when PDA was involved.