yayy! loved it xD

omigosh LMFAO. did NOT expect thatt. hahahaa.

CORBIN! i dont have anything against heath...apart from the obvious tho...but corbin is always so sweet to her..except for their first meeting..loll

CORBIN!

Love it

aw! so cute!! sad that his friend died but... :)
i was just gonna read a couple chapters and then go to sleep cuz its pretty late right now and i have school tomorrow... but i couldnt stop! XD
so i read this all in one sitting and my butt is numb... :/
lol.
thanks for the story!! :D :D :D

aww... cute ending:) i loove it:)

i really liked the story!

TANKS ALL THE WAY!

charlotte

Corbin all the way!
charlotte

Oh wow that was so adorable. Great story! I loved it!

Aw! Well I love how they got together!

I really did think that he died. Man. I was like no! But I love how you write... cus I am one of those people who skip over details.. cus it does get wayy too long.

I love how you made him think that she was going to leave him.. and the problem was that he was too tall haha.

Love your story! I might check out your other stories!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

haha you girl ROCK! i love it!1 omg i cried when i thought he was dead!:) i love this!

i really like the storyline but you have a LOT of spelling mistakes as well as a few grammar mistakes. it seems like you are spelling the words by pronunciation instead. no offense, but some of the words are pretty simple too.

AWE sweet story. Really great characters. I really liked them.

Okay I was expecting Sapphire, but Bray?! Seriously? Woah.