Love it

aw! so cute!! sad that his friend died but... :)
i was just gonna read a couple chapters and then go to sleep cuz its pretty late right now and i have school tomorrow... but i couldnt stop! XD
so i read this all in one sitting and my butt is numb... :/
lol.
thanks for the story!! :D :D :D

aww... cute ending:) i loove it:)

i really liked the story!

TANKS ALL THE WAY!

charlotte

Corbin all the way!
charlotte

Oh wow that was so adorable. Great story! I loved it!

Aw! Well I love how they got together!

I really did think that he died. Man. I was like no! But I love how you write... cus I am one of those people who skip over details.. cus it does get wayy too long.

I love how you made him think that she was going to leave him.. and the problem was that he was too tall haha.

Love your story! I might check out your other stories!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

haha you girl ROCK! i love it!1 omg i cried when i thought he was dead!:) i love this!

i really like the storyline but you have a LOT of spelling mistakes as well as a few grammar mistakes. it seems like you are spelling the words by pronunciation instead. no offense, but some of the words are pretty simple too.

AWE sweet story. Really great characters. I really liked them.

Okay I was expecting Sapphire, but Bray?! Seriously? Woah.

Okay Sapphire's matchmaking tendencies are starting to get suspicious. I suspect she knows something.

I really liked your story. It was sweet.. and had pretty good characters =p

reaaly good..

I'll try another of yours stories =)

This is a very sweet story. I loved it! Good job!

this is good and everything...but they're kind of moving a little too fast. Heath and Mac barely know each other, she just met his girlfriend, she just started hanging out with them and they act like they've known each other for years. THey have a pillow fight in the SECOND chapter. Most authors would put that in, I don't know, the 15th?