I love this story! :D
It's so adorable and concept was unique. *LOL* XD
I'm definitely adding this to my favorites. ;P

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! That was the only thing running through my mind when I finished. That was priceless~! I absolutely adored it. *adds to favorites* x 3

Hello,

Wow, what a brilliant concept. You did very very well with this story. You're writing is beautiful and your storyplot flowed fairly well. I could have done without the sex scene, especially considering Lance really is only a small child, even if he looks like a youth. It was very good, however, and I'm adding it to my favourites.

*insert frantic claps* Bravo! Bravo! Bravisimo! It was so cute! Lances embarrassment, Tybalts understanding...godfather Ravens smirk at the end. All the ingredients to a perfect story!. I really started clapping at the end. My dad officially thinks I'm nuts. Keep it up!

Oh waw, i really liked this i was a great take on the original story i really enjoyed it. :)

nice~XD

I found this story some years ago ( maybe 6 or 7 ) and it is still so wonderful! It comes to my mind once in a while, and in this Christmas season I do plan to read it soon! Ever so happy you wrote this.

~ Lin

*jumps up and down squeeling*

i love it!

*nosebleeds* ...*dies* W-wow... I like this a lot! No wonder you're named Yaoilisious. >w

Haha. I liked this. It was sweet, and, I feel there could have been a little bit more - but you know what?

Who cares. I can do without.

I'm really glad had such an open ended ending. It allowed me to use my imagination. And it was sweet. They needed to stay together, dream or not.

you are a god. and i love your stories. write on ^^

your penname is the freakin' total win. omg i wanted to hug you just for that. then this story made me nice and happy.

Loved. Absoulutely, positivly LOVED it.

;_; I'm moved to tears.

Loved it.