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| spada 2005-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm just curious. Is your name "teh tarik" by any chance a pun/word-play of some sort? Ahem, yeah, cause I kind of understand the words. :p |
| ChargesOfReckoning 2005-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseYes...I can almost see it happening all over again. The wave... the people... the dead... A very disorganised, but powerful poem. It captures the emotion felt when witnessing the actual event (I would know: I was there. I live in Thiailand and was only a few km away from ground zero) Keep writing more poetry. You're an excellent writer. |
| white-clouds 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Very creative way of writing this. This is so powerful. I feel sad and angry at the same time. Brilliant job |
| myno 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseon the second day of christmas... wow... awesome way to put it... Several people close to me nearly died in the tsunami- many of their friends did, and they barely survived, but i did not hear any news of them for almost a week after the tsunami, so it was a rather stressful time for me... Anyway, as you know, i can relate, and this is very interesting, wierd format. |
| Feral Hunger 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuseFirst time I think I've ever been in tears after reading a poem on this site. You did a beautiful job capturing what happened, the horror and the tragedy of it. Wonderfully written. |
| LancerDragoon 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseIntense! Portrayed the extremity of the tragedy very well... made me remember what I felt when I first saw the footage of dead bodies on CNN: horrified. Good poem, intense, deep and there're so many things in this poem it hurts. |
| celeritas 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseit was beautiful...brought a tear to my eye... |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. Nothing short of amazing. I've been trying to write something about tsunami for a while now, I'm still working on my piece, but yours is so much better than I could ever manage to come up with. Heartbreaking, but lovely. |
| really 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abusestylish classy elegant and beautifully disorganized. i love this one. i like the style, yay! |
| amphiboly 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseit's brilliant. you managed to capture the truth of this whole thing in a way, i've seen no other do. god bless the perished. |
| J Chou 2005-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewell, this poem is marvellous. It is based on what has really happened. Tsumani 2612 clearly shows that human's technology can't fight the tsunami and the danger of the tsunami. This time is in Southern and Southeast Asia and East Africa. Where and when the next time will be? No body knows. |
| linaeve 2005-01-08 ch 1, | abuseoh, beautiful and heartbreaking. you've painted every aspect of the tsunami with such breathtaking power-- illustrated its disaster, its effects, its indiscriminate rage. wonderful job.-lin |
| Ayx 2005-01-04 ch 1, | abuseYour words are so compelling touching and true...I don't even know what to say because in this poem you have taken my breath away with each line of truth Ayx |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the powerful poems I've read on this site. The format and the wording brought the sheer horror of it very, very well. There's no softening here, only the truth, no matter how painful it is. I cannot express how amazing this is - I commend you. Phenomenal work. |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like the format... its very well written and such a good and sad point.. awesome awesome poem |