|Reviews for When You Smile|
| Made in U.S.A 1/8/05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. Keep writing.
| AntiPleasure 1/3/05 . chapter 1
David, when are you gonna suck it up and talk to me? / Please.
Anyways, I'm glad you're using music lyrics/poems to back up your emotions... it's better than doing anything worse.