Reviews for It's Cold Outside

mari 2005-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseman, he is a bastard. good writing, I enjoyed reading this.
dcopulsky 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI thought it was pretty good until the last line. I couple peices of dialogue seemed a little lame or completely unrealistic, but mostly, it seemed real and they were saying something interesting. But then that last line. I just felt like you were awkwardly tacking on some sort of message that was unnessesary and didn't really make sense.