Very well done. I know how you feel. I've been lying quite a lot these days to. But anyhoot this was a very good poem. Fictionpress format thingy is really annoying but you make up for it with a brand spanking poem! Good job. ^^

oh wow! I can imangine this as a song!! great poem!! has the beat and rhyming! excellent!!

i especially liked the lines:"I lie, I lie to stay alive

I lie to stay the same

I know you're not to blame

But I will never change"

and"Lieing hurts us less

Maybe its for the best

Lieing hurts us less

Maybe its for the best"

fantastic!! Must fav. ^_^

Interesting - not saying I don't agree! Some of the rhyming is really good but there are a few rhymes that maybe arent so fitting - anyway only my opinion. But yeah a cool song!