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| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-11 ch 30, | abusehey, i have finally reached this point CAHPTER 30 #)!! XD i cannot wait until the next cahp! cya then BYE!!~ |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 15, | abusehahahahaha, im tired now considering the fact its almost 3am XD ill stop reading for tonight CYA LATER TODAY! |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 13, | abusewell this is highly unexpected like the first thing that popped into my mind was aliens when you asked us to guess what was hapening... but atlantis... i like it sudden twist anyway unpredictable storie are boring! very good! |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 6, | abusehahahahaha, cant wait till i read the nxt chap... a new friendship forming! |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 5, | abuseok... so i see he like drawing to music... and he does stuff in stages (base ect) but it takes him a while because he concentrates and makes it as accurate as possible... hmm very good so far cant wait till i start reading the next chapter |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 4, | abusedx... to tell you the truth i wasnt actually expecting that i mean i thought they'de kiss and all but... XD anywayz onto the next chap |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abusehm... maybe the kiss was a bit soon... they shoulda gotten to know each other better... but i guess its understandible XD onto the next chap! |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 2, | abuseawesum chapter but until i get up the the finth chapter i dont do long reviews so... ill keep going cya soon |
| Innocent Assassin 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusedx... whats the word im looking for... unique. XD onto the next chapter! |
| Mage Dudette 2008-02-24 ch 30, | abuseerr, no offense, but i'd forgotten about this story.. might jst have to re-read it though, in its entirity ^_^ as soon as i have a few hours to spare. good luck with updating too, *sends muses* sounds like a story thats not too far off being finished now, can't wait to see the ending. so yeh, keep it going ^_^ i'll be reading at least! |
| Amaya 2008-02-06 ch 30, anon. | abuseHmm, not a half bad story you have here. It could use a little bit of work, but I like it =D It reminds me very much of a fairytale, with a bit of a twist. I read through the whole thing in about 2 days, you do an great job of creating realistic characters. The only thing that you might want to work on is how fast you kind of jumped into things with Drake and Trey. Maybe next time you could build up to it a bit more, create some conflict for the characters before they finally wind up together as a couple. Such as angry school mates or friends trying to keep them apart, some kind of drama before they finally get together. You might also want to check over some of your chapters for grammar and spelling, just to fix up a few little things. Other then that, you're doing a great job with this, and I can't wait until you come out with the next chapter! I really hope that you update again soon, you left us all hanging with the declaration of war. I'll be on the look-out for an update, so until then, see ya! |
| Chris-no-Baka 2008-01-29 ch 30, | abusei can't stand the suspense any longer! what is going to happen damn it! wait, don't tell me, i don't want to know until it happens. I love the Fates angle and the foreshadowing, but it's killing me! i don't want anything bad to happen to trey and drake, i loves them! lol this is a fantastic story and i can't wait to read more! |
| Kat 2008-01-21 ch 30, anon. | abuseSo glad you're back! It was a good chapter, and I cant wait to reead more! ^_^ |
| Love Eternally 2008-01-07 ch 30, | abuseyay an update. its a depressing update but at least its an update |
| leemya 2008-01-07 ch 29, | abuseYour story is great! Will you be writing more anytime soon? |