 merrymowmow 2009-05-22 . chapter 30I was wondering when you're going to update? |
 Lady75 2008-11-07 . chapter 30update! will be love ^_^
ow tyler is so cutie~ love the couple
Thank you |
 autumn-annette-19 2008-10-20 . chapter 30Whats next, whats next. |
 kamikaze-chick-minuet 2008-10-11 . chapter 29Of course we still want to read. I've been waiting for this chapter forever! |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-11 . chapter 30hey, i have finally reached this point CAHPTER 30 #)!! XD i cannot wait until the next cahp!
cya then BYE!!~ |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 15hahahahaha, im tired now considering the fact its almost 3am XD ill stop reading for tonight CYA LATER TODAY! |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 13well this is highly unexpected like the first thing that popped into my mind was aliens when you asked us to guess what was hapening... but atlantis... i like it sudden twist anyway unpredictable storie are boring! very good! |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 6hahahahaha, cant wait till i read the nxt chap... a new friendship forming! |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 5ok... so i see he like drawing to music... and he does stuff in stages (base ect) but it takes him a while because he concentrates and makes it as accurate as possible... hmm very good so far cant wait till i start reading the next chapter |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 4dx... to tell you the truth i wasnt actually expecting that i mean i thought they'de kiss and all but... XD anywayz onto the next chap |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 3hm... maybe the kiss was a bit soon... they shoulda gotten to know each other better... but i guess its understandible XD onto the next chap! |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 2awesum chapter but until i get up the the finth chapter i dont do long reviews so... ill keep going cya soon |
 Irony for the Ironic 2008-04-03 . chapter 1dx... whats the word im looking for... unique. XD onto the next chapter! |
 Mage Dudette 2008-02-24 . chapter 30err, no offense, but i'd forgotten about this story..
might jst have to re-read it though, in its entirity ^_^ as soon as i have a few hours to spare.
good luck with updating too, *sends muses* sounds like a story thats not too far off being finished now, can't wait to see the ending.
so yeh, keep it going ^_^ i'll be reading at least! |
 Amaya 2008-02-06 . chapter 30 Hmm, not a half bad story you have here. It could use a little bit of work, but I like it =D It reminds me very much of a fairytale, with a bit of a twist. I read through the whole thing in about 2 days, you do an great job of creating realistic characters.
The only thing that you might want to work on is how fast you kind of jumped into things with Drake and Trey. Maybe next time you could build up to it a bit more, create some conflict for the characters before they finally wind up together as a couple. Such as angry school mates or friends trying to keep them apart, some kind of drama before they finally get together.
You might also want to check over some of your chapters for grammar and spelling, just to fix up a few little things. Other then that, you're doing a great job with this, and I can't wait until you come out with the next chapter!
I really hope that you update again soon, you left us all hanging with the declaration of war. I'll be on the look-out for an update, so until then, see ya! |