very good i think the ending would work with both 'me' and 'i' i like the me personally coz i think it sounds better than 'eye' and 'i' so good choice.

xxcsxx

::sigh:: the title works well.. it is very bittersweet.. well written

I disagree - I like the 'me' at the end.

Good work - it improves on each re-reading, and there's a few things to think about in it.

Thank you.

Not bad my girl, but I thought it may have sounded better if you'd used I instead of me for the last word, see ya